The Party
Her blue dress rustled as she stepped onto the street.
She breathed deeply of the scent from her beautiful bunch of peach stock.
The maid looked surprised to see Sumiko but took her present and flowers.
Something kind of rolled across the room,
Silence.
Marsha’s mother was staring right at Sumiko.
She put out her hand. “I’m Marsha’s mother,” she said.
Sumiko smiled with relief.
She gushed, “Your house is beautiful!”
Marsha’s mother put her arm around Sumiko and moved her onto the front porch.
She’d scarcely had a chance to see the house.
Her eyes were kind.
She smiled so warmly,
Sumiko couldn’t help smiling even harder than she already was.
“Marsha didn’t tell me you were in her class.”
“It’s not me, dear, but my husband…”
“I just want you to understand that if it were up to me…”
And Sumiko realized that she was being uninvited.
She understood,
Sumiko stood on the porch with the cake.
The ballerina,
The music,
The door.
She was Humiliated Sumiko.
This is what it felt like to be lonely.
Nice poem! I should have done one, too. What kind of poem is this?
ReplyDeleteI love this! This part is one of my favorites, but it is so incredibly sad! It breaks my heart because I can imagine being there, either watching it from the sidelines or being Sumiko myself.
ReplyDeleteThis is great! I love the way you took one scene out of the whole book and expanded it with great detail. This poem is so great, I felt every detail as if I was standing right beside Sumiko at the birthday party. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteWow! What a great post. I think this was so well done and I love how you recreated this scene.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem. It flows really well and captures the scene perfectly. The initial confusion of Sumiko, the mother's fear, and the tragic sadness of the moment are packaged beautifully in this stanza. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI agree! This is a very nice poem and I think that it describes what Sumiko went through very well!
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing poem. You really captured Sumiko's feelings while she was at the party.
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