I'm really small, I can squeeze into little holes!
Bo is too small...
He started to laugh and looked so happy,
Come and catch me!
The city has welcomed Bo
like a great and gentle animal.
I'm not scared!
This world is full of wonders...
Bo didn't seem particularly bothered by the whole thing.
He was quite happy to touch the lion's head by the fountain
and to dip his hands in the cold water.
It's much nicer here...
Bo's the least noticeable isn't he?
Two hops on his right leg and two on the left
Bo never walked- he ran or bounced.
Bo is too small...
He started to laugh and looked so happy,
Come and catch me!
The city has welcomed Bo
like a great and gentle animal.
I'm not scared!
This world is full of wonders...
Bo didn't seem particularly bothered by the whole thing.
He was quite happy to touch the lion's head by the fountain
and to dip his hands in the cold water.
It's much nicer here...
Bo's the least noticeable isn't he?
Two hops on his right leg and two on the left
Bo never walked- he ran or bounced.
I like how you were able to relate everything to Bo. Good job on making it all run together too, i dont think my poem was a good connection like yours i had a sort of abstract poem.
ReplyDeleteYou really bring out Bo's qualities and characteristics in this poem. Nice job with being able to have the poem to just focus on Bo. I really enjoyed reading your poem.
ReplyDeleteThe poem flows well. It almost acts as a short character sketch. It's fun too, which is always nice!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, Megan! I especially loved your last line: Bo never walked - he ran or bounced. This really captures Bo's carefree nature. He could still hop around with no worries, unlike his big brother, who had to carry the weight of the world on his young shoulders. Thank you for posting this.
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